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Before we kissed, I never knew the taste of twilight...
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-Lightless Refrain-
I cried in the place where time drew its last breath. I once remembered its warm embrace, but the memories left me to drift in a sea of shattered dreams. The refrain of days past faded into the nothingness while I longed for the pure light of the firefly.
But as sight is lost in the sun's fiery stare, I was greeted only by a malicious shadow. Like a demonic sprite, it danced around me, and as my eyes turned green emerald tears ran free. I sensed in the shifting darkness an eternal hopelessness, and I opened myself to it.
When time lost all meaning, all time became lost. Burning recollections left me cold, as hope wept a solemn nocturne.
I was alone.
The timeless serenade of immortality died as a final listless smile crossed my tear-strewn face. The memory of life escaped my pleading hands, like Yours so long ago.
Through the icy blue window of sleep, I saw the black rain melt the world.
-Adam Morsa 5:03 PM 9-6-03
















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"Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for truth." -Disraeli
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Thanks is nice, but a comment is better!
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Anyway, the picture doesn't matter. The poem though was wonderful in every aspect.
"The timeless serenade of immortality died as a final listless smile crossed my tear-strewn face. The memory of life escaped my pleading hands, like Yours so long ago. Through the icy blue window of sleep, I saw the black rain melt the world."
My favorite part, it's like you've put my feelings/emotions to paper. So beautiful, definately a +fav forever. And don't worry about the format of it (looking like prose) .. no one ever said poetry had to look a certain way, and actually the set up makes it stronger.
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And you find yourself on a velvet couch tasting the skin of a foreign girl. Her eyes are black and wet like oil and she ties your hands with a string of pearls.
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And you find yourself on a velvet couch tasting the skin of a foreign girl. Her eyes are black and wet like oil and she ties your hands with a string of pearls.
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"If you can't get someone out of your head, maybe they're supposed to be there."
"She walks away and he faithfully follows."
i love every part
they are just so amazing
and stir such emotion
it's almost overwelming...
(in a good way, dont get me wrong)
your words are so amazing
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I have no more cute things to say, this is just me stripped
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To truly love someone you must revel in their existence, because they make life all the more wonderful. -Goodkind
A comment for a comment is always appreciated!
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"Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for truth." -Disraeli
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Thanks is nice, but a comment is better!
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If I could put them in a jar
I know they wouldn't scar
I'd do it if I could
I hope you know I would
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"Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for truth." -Disraeli
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Thanks is nice, but a comment is better!
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