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Innocent Integration by ~seekingtruth:iconseekingtruth:

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-Innocent Integration-

What memory doth live in sleep?
Those and they who secrets keep
Devoutly leaving seekers blind
Bring sickness bleeding men in bind
So that without a care to speak
Knowledge dies with times nigh bleak

What of our breed would so hold back?
Concealed is truth as shadows black
Strength doth stem those drawn to rile
An afterthought bringing a transient smile
Though understanding some may possess
Acquiescence yields to littler stress

What part of thee has yet to cry?
Few thoughts now breathe before they die
The battles fought at mortal risk
Are tamer still than guile's kiss
Should time not shift its dire course
Then freedoms lost know not remorse

-Adam Morsa 3:20 PM 8/29/03
©2003-2009 ~seekingtruth
:iconseekingtruth:

Author's Comments

This poem has a vibe of some sort running through it. I'm not telling, though. :shrug:

And yes, I meant "littler." As in, little, like small, and then er. I was inspired to write like this after reading some Shakespeare in me English class. I thought the sound of "littler," whether it's a real word or not, fit the style I used.

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~xxxemotionalkid Aug 29, 2003, 3:08:57 PM
Beautiful, as is all your work. I especially like the last verse..

"What part of thee has yet to cry?
Few thoughts now breathe before they die"

wonderful.. the rhymes all flow together like it was meant to be ... :)
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~-rhetoric- Aug 29, 2003, 4:47:20 PM
damn youre good
keep it up!
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~zurak Aug 29, 2003, 8:02:09 PM
Very nice, you stupid mother-fucking-pussy-eating-son-of-a-bit ch. There, all but the first word of that insult is true. ;) Awesome poem. I love this style. The words used bring out this crazy voice in my head. :crazy::eyepopping: No, not that voice, the voice I hear when I read Shakespeare, you dumbass!

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To truly love someone you must revel in their existence, because they make life all the more wonderful. -Goodkind

A comment for a comment is always appreciated!
:iconseekingtruth:
~seekingtruth Aug 29, 2003, 8:30:13 PM
:lmao::rofl:

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"Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for truth." -Disraeli
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Thanks is nice, but a comment is better!
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:mwahaha:p|-|3412!!!:mwahaha:
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:crazy::eyepopping:Keep smiling!:stab::slow:
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~justkristy Aug 30, 2003, 7:47:42 AM
i love this!! sooo much!!! Keep it up! You're really good at this style. i hope to read more of it.

*kristy*
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*dcmbrnite Aug 30, 2003, 10:09:36 AM
this is excellent!! very moving and I love the language you have uses...and indeed..there is a vibe :D

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All things Foamy
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~lockedinside Aug 30, 2003, 12:59:59 PM
perty good perty good
great job
i likes

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:tears:†Kyle Franklin†:tears:
:tears:†Grandpa Bob†:tears:
:tears:†Baby Jake Preston†:tears:
:tears:†Sierra Renee Follette†:tears:
:sadangel:R-I-P I miss you All:sadangel:

...+I can't cry all the time...cus it shouldn't hurt
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~nightwhispers Aug 31, 2003, 3:49:36 PM
Stunning vocabulary hon, absolutely stunning.. this has awesome imagery.

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If I could put them in a jar
I know they wouldn't scar
I'd do it if I could
I hope you know I would
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~johnni Aug 31, 2003, 8:03:42 PM
Omfg, Jason, you crack me up!

Alrighty. I love the way this was written. I got the message. Very nice.

Yes, this is a crappy comment.

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I'm an optimistic realist- is that an oxymoron?

"Does God want goodness or the choice of goodness? Is a man who chooses to be bad perhaps in some way better than a man who has the good imposed upon him?" -Prison Chaplain (Clockwork Orange)
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